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You good my man?

Alive but getting better

Good to hear, we'd hate to lose someone who makes wof content 

Hi I am new to this type of game so I need to know more about this game before I play this game

thats fine. feel free to ask questions.
in short its a story where you can choose the direction and how it goes

it has saving/ loading and so far (i want to say) a fair bit of content 

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It's okay dude we can be patient

Is icicles route done

no its not its just there is a lot more to do before her route can continue for now

Ok 👍

Ok good news...i got most the code worked..."most" now just need to fix a exit error but once that's done should be good to upload :D

just a heads up the next update is NOT done yet the code is really fighting and i will need more time (if i cant get it done in 8 days i will let you lot know)

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Well, you're obviously better at this than I was lol. I hope you keep at it, I'm really enjoying your additions. <3 

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thanks im still trying to work on it but the coding really likes fighting me lately

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You're doing great so far keep it up!!!

Also, I think either more frequent small updates or a set scheduled update dates is the way to go when releasing your content.

But take my words however you please I do not mean to offend

thanks for the feedback 

im hoping to do smaller updates its just i keep getting distracted

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ok so...i want peoples opinion

the next update is still underway (i keep adding more instead of continuing the story T_T but i am working bit by bit)

so the question is do you lot want what i currently have or wait till there is more? (a lot of it is hidden and requires some work to get)

not sure if I should be frustrated or annoyed that when I try and involve the "users" no one responds 

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To be honest, it might be better to add what you have now to keep players entertained looking for secrets. Also great work so far

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just found out someone tried to hack my email (someone in Poland) thankfully there was no damage so everything should be alright

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just a heads up the next update is already underway but the code is...fighting me along with trying to make it easier to tell who is talking (I realized it may be a bit hard) so I wanted to ask if lot would you prefer having one page set done or wait till a full section is done?


(a page set is one choice from a page while the full section is all choices)

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Definitely interested! I enjoyed what I read so far!

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sorry there hasn't been a update i have been sick and dealing with anxiety along with life not giving me a break.

i have been trying to working on the next update but its slow progress as i have not been well but i am still working on it so please just bear with me

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Hey, great job so far. I haven’t seen much besides going checkpoint two and up to stepping in when Winter yells at them, but it’s a great game so far. I wonder though if they’ll be consequences for Ember’s actions with the girls.

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Good text adventure

ALOT of typos but still readable 

Keep up the good work

Can't seem to actually access the other chapter and i dont see the gear for me to be able to access the rest of the chapters when i downloaded it

you should just need to look at the game page and look next to the launch button (on pc) i am unable to check on mobile rn but i hope this helps

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Dragons do have ear look it up

How would dragons not have ears

just a heads up i had a kidney stone yesterday and have been having writers block so the next update will be delayed sorry about that

is this your doing jimmy                                                                                                                         jimmy     thinks                                                                     skywing is bad he rape jimmy                     is on tysnamis side jimmy likess dragons

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It seems to work just fine on browser, I made it all the way to Icicle's storyline and hunting, but I stayed as Ember (Chapter 26). When I tried the app it let me choose the type of dragon, name, and everything, I just wasn't able to go past the scene With Moon in the cave (Chapter 12). Good work all around, just a couple of glitches that may or may not be just on my end.

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that's because there is 2 different versions and for some reason only one shows up for download all you should need to do is hit the gear (manage) and you should see both versions.

one version has more detail but is shorter and the other is the main and the one im working on for now (i have titled them "expanded" and "remade")

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I see, well I hope you keep working on it. The writing is really good and blended really well with Kattriz's writing.

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This is great cant wait till done to enjoy full experience

So when will you edit it after your break if so it's ok!

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im hoping to start working on it again in a few days if nothing big happens again

but for now i am just thinking and trying to get stuff under control again

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Ok thx for the reply!

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Wait so you can't do Starflight or clay I was really hoping so ;-;

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it wont make sense for the player character in expanded version but you might be able to one day in the remade version

Bet😁

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You should try and add peril into the anemone route like maybe she could enchant you to be fireproof or smth, and yea after the jma part you should get to go to some other kingdoms and claim their queens and some others too 

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hmm...that does seem like a good idea and i will look into how to weave it into the story

also thanks for the feedback

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I love this idea too i wish it was a game though an not a text based thing i mean its not to bad for it just the things u do to a dragoness  i wish i seen this in the games but i noticed there is mostly gay dragon stuff than straight ones like this story, course i use a android, anyways i shall wait for more fun nice work kattriz keep up with the story text 🥵.

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Thanks and as much as i agree its a fairly hard project for me to work on but its a big maybe (also yes i have very much noticed the amount of gay dragon stuff)

(quick note kattriz is the original creator while i am expanding on Their work (with Their permission)

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I mean, ive seen the gay dragon stuff its alright just im bi so id like to see more kinda straight or futa stories or games than just m/m, but yes its still an amazing wip story ur making at least my phone can do the story to it so i dont need to download it, but yes i wish i seen some  games on itch io of dragons either futa or straight games but i hadnt seen any except this story text one your doing, an oh kattriz is the original maker, oh my bad but either way its nice, an yes ik these games are tough to keep working  on so just take ur time whitedrago.~ 😌

i plan to keep working on it but it just might take time as all things do

yes whitedrago i understand ^^,  i hope u make it real well~

A error keeps popping up in the game

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what page has the error?

(from what i can see i think i forgot to fix some code T_T but it should be fixed now i hope)

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It's not loading in

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im trying to work out why its not loading on the website but it works fine on the app i hope i will be able to fix it asap

(i believe the loading should be fixed now)

All right it works 

I Can not wait to fuck icicle

lol jimmy  think               skywing is bad skywing       tried to rape her jimmy                  dose not like that jimmy knows its bad

It looks good so far

I can't wait to see the finished route for icicle